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Nurture Your Story Critiques

Nurture Your Story mini manuscript critiques are only available for a limited time. This offering is for you if…

  • you’ve resolved to query agents and want to show them your best work

  • you're itching to submit your latest manuscript but want to be sure it's ready

  • you’ve poured your heart into your work but feel lost or stuck

  • you’re ready to grow as a writer

  • you like to revise in stages

Each mini manuscript critique includes the three most important changes you can make to transform your manuscript. If you’re like most writers, three changes is plenty! My feedback is designed to help you revise with clarity and move on to your next draft with confidence. 

  • Offer closes 1/31.

  • All critiques will be complete by 2/25.

  • Each critique is $99.

  • Picture books only. Fiction or nonfiction welcome.

  • Only 10 spots available.

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Heidi’s critique was incredibly insightful and lit a fire within me. Her feedback inspired me to dig into my manuscript and make revisions. Afterward I felt more prepared to submit my work with confidence. Her insightful critique is 100% worth the money, and my favorite part of working with her was developing a friendship with a fellow book lover who cares about my work.
— Meghann Albright, Writer

(If you’re looking for more guidance, I’m still offering my complete critique. Deepen Your Story critiques start at $250 and include feedback on format, plot, character development, voice, and marketability, as well as custom competitor analysis and recommended next steps.)