Manuscript Critiques

Imagine seeing your book on the shelf of your favorite bookstore and feeling proud. Manuscript critiques include a deep read that's designed to identify your manuscript's essential strengths and weaknesses with plot, character, pacing, theme, voice, and marketability. You’ll also get clear editorial direction on prioritizing revisions and taking the next steps. I include fresh market research on competitor titles and suggest mentor texts. My feedback is designed to help you take your manuscript to the next level and can serve as a personal touchstone that you can return to throughout the revision process.

Picture Book Critique

Chapter Book Critique

Middle Grade Critique

What’s it like to get a critique?

  • “Heidi’s critique was incredibly insightful and lit a fire within me. Her feedback inspired me to dig into my manuscript and make revisions. Afterward I felt more prepared to submit my work with confidence. Her insightful critique is 100% worth the money, and my favorite part of working with her was developing a friendship with a fellow book lover who cares about my work."

  • "Heidi makes the editing process a breeze to understand, and she took the time and care to understand what I wanted to say. She didn’t just critique my manuscript, she infused my story with a deeper meaning. Working with her gave me the confidence to put my work out there. Next time I write, I’ll be thinking about how I can give my stories more heart, or maybe I’ll just hire Heidi again. Working with her was absolutely delightful!"

  • “I am blown away. How lovely to get your insight and have it be so deep and wide-ranging, so clearly articulated, and so kindly put. You have far exceeded my hopes and expectations about what you might do.”

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